Who on Insidehoops can Rap?

[DJmicah]

besides Mr. I'm So Rad?

[DJmicah]

Al Thornton said YungTyrekeEvens can rap
is he good? I wanna see Proof



not this guy either
http://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/thumb/0/06/ProofAug05.jpg/220px-ProofAug05.jpg

[DJmicah]

Tyreke is hella good, Thorton wasnt lying
how do you know?

[NoName22]

Jay-A

[DJmicah]

lyrics or gtfo

[BoogieWoogieMan]

Jay-A

:oldlol:

[DJmicah]

Someone posted a link to a song of his....
whats his rap alias?

[mcrd101]

i do. honestly i'm not too good over a beat flowwise and such but i think i have good lyrics.

[DJmicah]

i do. honestly i'm not too good over a beat flowwise and such but i think i have good lyrics.
post some and ill rate it 1-10

[Draz]

I used to rap a lot. I redid my computer and lost everything I got so mad I stopped.

[NastaMaverick]

I made a track with playtetris once...:lol

[yungtyrekeevans]

i just need some more space like a hungry work deprived astronaut
step back and let me blast off so i can accelerate my speed of thought
im flyer than flyers, both promotional and actual
aint rapped in a while but the love stays unconditional
i overdose on ferocios, youd be audacious to try and face this
other rappers are make-shift, too basic, misplaced kid
im a-ching that im a king, and that these talents are left to wasting.

just used some creative juices to think of something on the spot for y'all.

[D12"Magic"]

I used to have Rap Battles in school :lol, One time I made this Rap called Mortal Kombat :roll:

[Fawker]

i just need some more space like a hungry work deprived astronaut
step back and let me blast off so i can accelerate my speed of thought
im flyer than flyers, both promotional and actual
aint rapped in a while but the love stays unconditional
i overdose on ferocios, youd be audacios to try and face this
other rappers are make-shift, too basic, misplaced kid
im a-ching that im a king, and that these talents are left to wasting.

just used some creative juices to think of something on the spot for y'all.
:sleeping

[yungtyrekeevans]

:sleeping

thats what i call the lullaby rap.

knew i had skills.

[D12"Magic"]

thats what i call the lullaby rap.

knew i had skills.
:lol

[DJmicah]

i just need some more space like a hungry work deprived astronaut
step back and let me blast off so i can accelerate my speed of thought
im flyer than flyers, both promotional and actual
aint rapped in a while but the love stays unconditional
i overdose on ferocios, youd be audacious to try and face this
other rappers are make-shift, too basic, misplaced kid
im a-ching that im a king, and that these talents are left to wasting.

just used some creative juices to think of something on the spot for y'all.
i hope that was a freestyle...still better than plies and rick ross lol

[yungtyrekeevans]

i hope that was a freestyle...still better than plies and rick ross lol

i aint putting no writtens up here.

so the stuff you see is some lazy ass quick writing.

[DJmicah]

i aint putting no writtens up here.

so the stuff you see is some lazy ass quick writing.
dont want people stealing it? :lol
Heres mine:
Gangstas drop out while the women graduate, they wanna be rappers but they stink like flatulate, and I'm sorry that I had to hate, but then they try ballin and they can't even pass it straight,see what I'm sayin is don't try to be, they guys you hear about from listenin to plies and jeez, I wonder if you even learned 2 rite and raed, I'm the type of G, to rhyme and speak,whatevers on my mind for free, and all my real friends know I just speak, on whatever eye can see(get it?),and what I see is homies on the street tryin to clone me on a beat, in other words be like me, not every kids needs to insist that he lives off rhyming, not every one can spit with perfect timing, or swish 35 threes, your life is a movie, write your own lines G

[D12"Magic"]

dont want people stealing it? :lol
Heres mine:
Gangstas drop out while the women graduate, they wanna be rappers but they stink like flatulate, and I'm sorry that I had to hate, but then they try ballin and they can't even pass it straight,see what I'm sayin is don't try to be, they guys you hear about from listenin to plies and jeez, I wonder if you even learned 2 rite and raed, I'm the type of G, to rhyme and speak,whatevers on my mind for free, and all my real friends know I just speak, on whatever eye can see(get it?),and what I see is homies on the street tryin to clone me on a beat, in other words be like me, not every kids needs to insist that he lives off rhyming, not every one can spit with perfect timing, or swish 35 threes, your life is a movie, write your own lines G
:applause:

[D12"Magic"]

I Spit Fire through the Eyes, Everyone Closely Listen
I was killed by Barbed-Wire im not Alive this shit was Ghostly Written
I Acquire from the Wise, Now you know why I Mostly Glisten
My Attire is a Device, Im Cold, I Suppose im Frost Bitten
My Desire Runs and Hides, I guess its Lost Spitten
I Require Deathly Spies to search your house and to Toss Kittens
You Transpire into your own Demise, I have this in My Blood im Hip Hop Bitten

[DJmicah]

I Spit Fire through the Eyes, Everyone Closely Listen
I was killed by Barbed-Wire im not Alive this shit was Ghostly Written
I Acquire from the Wise, Now you know why I Mostly Glisten
My Attire is a Device, Im Cold, I Suppose im Frost Bitten
My Desire Runs and Hides, I guess its Lost Spitten
I Require Deathly Spies to search your house and to Toss Kittens
You Transpire into your own Demise, I have this in My Blood im Hip Hop Bitten
thats great

[DJmicah]

I wrote this to young forever:
I wish I could be forever young, forget about the pain like it never stung, some lives have been wasted ima make this a better one, I wish I could grow down instead of up,i met a tough, women who said in love, she was but I knew she wanted bread and such, it's like after you get older you've said enough, I knew that that after I met her, see she was chasin cash since she was graded by letters,what you do when you're young determines who you are, I wanna be young forever to change the names that's glued on

[D12"Magic"]

thats great
Thanks, yours was not bad either :cheers:

[Derrick]

i spit fire yo

[DJmicah]

i spit fire yo
lets see it...

[bdreason]

I can rap.

[DJmicah]

i aint putting no writtens up here.

so the stuff you see is some lazy ass quick writing.
just post one,we arent going to steal it

[D12"Magic"]

I can rap.
Lets hear it then

[DJmicah]

lyrics or gtfo
:rolleyes:

[Doomsnite Danny]

it's yo boy Jay-A... listen.... yo... yo...

i make my gun clap in your **** flaps and make you conceive lead
you a bitch on a rag your ***** bleed your maxi pad all red
yo hoe a tramp that every body jump on like a trampoline
mean when i wax off and wax on like the karate kid mister miyagi or jackie chan
will smith's son or ralph macchio it don't matter knock you out with the eagle kick
you spick trying to rap i drag you off the stage
you're a drag queen gangster like rupaul lifting weights
make you plank on top of nails your ***** stank and stale
wussy drank ginger ale and got liquid courage but failed
send you emails of me and your girl from the bahamas
and yo momma with us on some threesome shit
u mad on some camron shit bleeding on some tampon shit
****** eyed on some wonton shit cheerleadin ass on some pom pom shit
you'r a *** and you were born with it like maybelene
i'm spoiled with the rhymes cuz i spit sweet sixteens
split the swish in between sprinkle some mean green
i'm tighter than five dylans tigher than a gay activist jeans...

[bdreason]

Lets hear it then


http://www.myspace.com/dapessimist

[D12"Magic"]

http://www.myspace.com/dapessimist
:cheers:

[blablabla]

kaiiu he is from the hood

[DJmicah]

http://www.myspace.com/dapessimist
:rockon:

[DJmicah]

it's yo boy Jay-A... listen.... yo... yo...

i make my gun clap in your **** flaps and make you conceive lead
you a bitch on a rag your ***** bleed your maxi pad all red
yo hoe a tramp that every body jump on like a trampoline
mean when i wax off and wax on like the karate kid mister miyagi or jackie chan
will smith's son or ralph macchio it don't matter knock you out with the eagle kick
you spick trying to rap i drag you off the stage
you're a drag queen gangster like rupaul lifting weights
make you plank on top of nails your ***** stank and stale
wussy drank ginger ale and got liquid courage but failed
send you emails of me and your girl from the bahamas
and yo momma with us on some threesome shit
u mad on some camron shit bleeding on some tampon shit
****** eyed on some wonton shit cheerleadin ass on some pom pom shit
you'r a *** and you were born with it like maybelene
i'm spoiled with the rhymes cuz i spit sweet sixteens
split the swish in between sprinkle some mean green
i'm tighter than five dylans tigher than a gay activist jeans...
can you do anything else then battle?

[Lucifer]

Will rap for food

[DJmicah]

kaiiu he is from the hood
:oldlol:

[DJmicah]

just wrote: In rap I'm surrounded by words, my instrumentals send body signals to make most rappers squirm,then I hit em with the syndromes that show I could be a germ, to infect your brain and make you say my name to make me known around the universe, and whats worse is i beat you without having to spurt a curse, and i lurk, in your mind where nothing seems to work, i say this cuz its just facts, look at your favorite rapper im right above that, i know this braggin may anger you, in fact i bet my success brings pain to you, my lyrics are pictures, im about to paint a few,your prolly mad cuz the media is whats makin you

[L.Kizzle]

Oh are we spittin rhymes in here now?
We spittin rhymes, u spitten semen.
That's the truth nigha, u ain't dreamin!

[DJmicah]

Oh are we spittin rhymes in here now?
how else would we prove that we are good at it?

[JerrySteakhouse]

Record a verse and upload that shit, REP ISH.

[DJmicah]

Record a verse and upload that shit, REP ISH.
:pimp:

[D12"Magic"]

I tossed Rick Ross into a Dump Truck and had his Thumb Stuck in the hood of the car looking like a Dumb Fu ck.
Rap is now at a Stand Still. You Cant Fill the hole I was in even if you lived in an Anthill.
Some cant Catch my Flow, They cant Match my Glow. Hell you couldn't even snatch it if you had a Bow and Arrow
They say I don't make sense, like i give a ****, I got enough money to pay your rent, with all the right intents I let they haters catch the finger, I'll raise it up slow so you can catch the suspense

Not really a verse just little punch lines I just though of.

[DJmicah]

sometimes i wonder who really knows me, hopefully, i know these, people i call homies,then i slowly, find out they were phonies, i never get high i always sing low key,but i aint always singin the right songs,i freestyle through life i got nothin to write on,any small choice could explode like bombs, so i turn the mic on and hope u miss me when im gone

[JerrySteakhouse]

sometimes i wonder who really knows me, hopefully, i know these, people i call homies,then i slowly, find out they were phonies, i never get high i always sing low key,but i aint always singin the right songs,i freestyle through life i got nothin to write on,any small choice could explode like bombs, so i turn the mic on and hope u miss me when im gone

Drake...

[DJmicah]

Drake...
thats the beat i wrote it to...good job
lose yourself:
now he has the chance, to grab his plans, with savage hands, with which he used to master fans, brain to make em say that's the man,his minds fried on a gassed up pan,flabbergast the fans, that's the plan

[L.Kizzle]

One to tha three, 4, 5, 7.
I got a mac-11
I watch 7th Heaven
AT the church with the Reverend
I know a Dude named Devin (get it)
He's 2 (x) 11
I got the same on my ride
I likes to get hi
This chick let me have a peace if her pie
I ain't 50 Tyson, but I ain't gonna lie

ch'yeah!

[mcrd101]

post some and ill rate it 1-10

most recent verse, first time writing again after a several month hiatus:

burned all the bridges and built an island/
in the distance I hear the voice of sirens/
dedication developed destruction/
a bleeding heart beating disruption/
I built this island independently/
Bring blame to none unless it's me/
this is not a plea for sympathy/
this is to see self-inflicted injury/
I will build the walls and lend cement to bridges/
fill my bars with built-in scars, never to forget this/

this is probably more of my "usual" stuff (im iffy on the flow for the top one)

more and more monotony constantly/
from rest to where my conscious be/
eat, class, class work and more cuisine/
the line between a day and the next not bordering/
rather overlapping, sorta seems like quartering/
living life in the infinity of symmetry/
on a twenty-four hour schedule to limit me/
it gets to me, that I have to live life logistically/
the repetition repeats on a lengthy larger scale/
if I follow my master's plan it'll be hard to fail/

[DJmicah]

most recent verse, first time writing again after a several month hiatus:

burned all the bridges and built an island/
in the distance I hear the voice of sirens/
dedication developed destruction/
a bleeding heart beating disruption/
I built this island independently/
Bring blame to none unless it's me/
this is not a plea for sympathy/
this is to see self-inflicted injury/
I will build the walls and lend cement to bridges/
fill my bars with built-in scars, never to forget this/

this is probably more of my "usual" stuff (im iffy on the flow for the top one)

more and more monotony constantly/
from rest to where my conscious be/
eat, class, class work and more cuisine/
the line between a day and the next not bordering/
rather overlapping, sorta seems like quartering/
living life in the infinity of symmetry/
on a twenty-four hour schedule to limit me/
it gets to me, that I have to live life logistically/
the repetition repeats on a lengthy larger scale/
if I follow my master's plan it'll be hard to fail/
:eek:

[DJmicah]

I wanna be a legend like outkast, one of the greats but now cats, wanna shout raps about gats, now hows that, they just wanna be loud as, when 1,000 cows pass, to make the crowd laugh, now rap,doesnt relate to you, it aint about that, it's about you're chains like hound tags,ive come to take these ideas and pound that, into the brown grass and wow dad

[DJmicah]

A verse I writing earlier. Just some random shit

Arguably my artistry's
The hardest thing you harkening
No barkin b!tch,
Skip me wit a b!tch that want a promise ring
Ok back to the art again
My argument
My artificial artifice
My target is,
Hip Hop head bi-partisans
Don't forget who started this
We are all a part of this
Instead of tryna bother it
Why not help out and foster it?
Ok..pause again
I just said what you thought again
While you chew on yo ball point pen
My pencil's steady sharpenin
Clouds are gettin dark and then
Hear you b!tches barkin then
Get your life, I'll get my time
Then we'll come out and barter them
:bowdown: you sounded like Percee P

[DJmicah]

I learned this in advance, it's a lot different when your the kid in the stands,sittin with fans,while your idols on stage gettin his grands,so I decided, I wouldn't be misguided, I asked why did, he get so famous he didn't have to bash, an eyelid, and he could easily have the cash, and diamonds, for a girl he'll probably stab n' the back,what could it be, for this suckin mc, cuz his lyrics aint nothin to me, at last I found it out, the source of the fame,nothing, he got lucky to be the fourth in the game

[DJmicah]

need a good rap I'm the first to call, the worst of y'all, get reimbursed in all, the gangs and the chains and become the first to fall, and worst of all, get beat by me so bad that you can't spit a word at all, I know it hurts but all, of this I spit is true, but don't let it get you, just find a good beat to spit to, and quit rappin' bout a fake life and talk about what you did do...

[pauk]

me....

so... bow down

[DJmicah]

me....

so... bow down
youre gonna rap about Lebron I bet :oldlol: go ahead

[Doomsnite Danny]

yo yo yo turn me up...yo turn me up...here we go...turn me up...i said turn me up muhphucka...yo check it...turn me up...all the way up...there you go...no louder muhphucka...yo yo...check it...you need new headphones muhphucka...yo it's all about the headphones muhphucka...

[pauk]

Here is a more gangsta verse I haven't released yet

Uh, I feel hi like an informal greeting
It's bout time me and my destiny have had a meeting
No longer will I tread in mediocre waters
From now on I spit heavy hydro-septic slaughter
Don't listen them n!ggas always tellin you they made ya
I know I'm never alone, I've always got my haters
You say you walkin tall but why yo money runnin short?
Don't you make have to catch a body like a bungee chord
They see that I put em on, n!ggas try to off me!
I'll put f*ckin iron to his tee like a golf swing!
I don't need no pepper motherf*cka I'm assaulting!
YOU!
Cuz I'm comin with them knives and a twen-ty two
Like the old Brock Lesnar n!gga I'm a bring the pain!
I'm an underground slave, freed from my commercial chains
I have overwhelming rage, you will see I'm in-sane!
When I hang them f*ckin (cross) hairs across yo face like bangs!

http://i51.tinypic.com/1182ihc.gif

[pauk]

yo yo yo turn me up...yo turn me up...here we go...turn me up...i said turn me up muhphucka...yo check it...turn me up...all the way up...there you go...no louder muhphucka...yo yo...check it...you need new headphones muhphucka...yo it's all about the headphones muhphucka...

hahahahahaha :applause:

[DJmicah]

yo yo yo turn me up...yo turn me up...here we go...turn me up...i said turn me up muhphucka...yo check it...turn me up...all the way up...there you go...no louder muhphucka...yo yo...check it...you need new headphones muhphucka...yo it's all about the headphones muhphucka...
they need to be alllll the waaaaay tuuuuurrrnnt uppppp

[DJmicah]

http://i55.tinypic.com/23idr2w.jpg
upgrade to Pro :facepalm
Edit: nvm pauk cant rap anyways...

[bdreason]

Having spent a few years in the hip-hop scene, one thing I learned is; for every 20 people who can write rhymes, only 1 can actually rap. I've known so many 'rappers' that could write dope lyrics, many whom I thought were way better than mine... but they just couldn't deliver the flow.

[pauk]

My Swag trolls you hard
Your Swag makes you a retard
My swag often kills ISH
Your swag is only about wish wish wish

My swag bigger than a boat
Your swag looks like the bloat
My swag vicious like T-rex
Your swag is squashed between my pecks

My swag - larger than life, right
Your swag suffer from Pauk fright
My swag - attracts bever
Your swag t-bags Justin Bieber

My swag - 'nuff said.
Your swag - gives head.

[DJmicah]

My Swag trolls you hard
Your Swag makes you a retard
My swag often kills ISH
Your swag is only about wish wish wish

My swag bigger than a boat
Your swag looks like the bloat
My swag vicious like T-rex
Your swag is squashed between my pecks

My swag - larger than life, right
Your swag suffer from Pauk fright
My swag - attracts bever
Your swag t-bags Justin Bieber

My swag - 'nuff said.
Your swag - gives head.
nicki minaj has a insidehoops account lol

[Doomsnite Danny]

**** that bitch that trick ass hoe
bend over tramp and stick my pole

[pauk]

jellyness

PWNED

[D12"Magic"]

Can A Non-Troll Rate This Please

Lets be honest
Whos the most Bombest and the hardest ?
Im the Most Darkest Artist that was not born in August
My Fan base is the Largest
My potential is Promised to be the most Modest
Im the Most Cleverest and Harshest
D12-Magic A.K.A The Smartest

I own this place its my Sector
Bitches just Bicker and make corny Jesters talking to me like its a Lecture
I'll Beat all the Dexter looking people wearing turtle neck Sweater's to death with a Feather
Whether the Weather is Wetter then Ever im Better than all the Competitors
Being the best is my Pleasure
Slamming n!ggas like a Wrestler. Im the new Embezzler
My Texture is the Center of every Venture
Ill destroy all im A Wrecker who's should not be Reckoned with by a ISH Member
Haters Bow Down or get hit with my Compressor's
My Shit is to big to Measure
Im every ones Mentor
Flow harder than Ghost rider drinking an Alka Seltzer
This was not an Error I was born to bring Terror
Im not Criticizing other's just speaking the truth Im the Inspector

[pauk]

http://i55.tinypic.com/2ufzpjm.jpg

http://i1106.photobucket.com/albums/h376/Diclonius_18/Al-Bundy-1.gif

[Fawker]

this must be amateur night:(

[Doomsnite Danny]

Can A Non-Troll Rate This Please

Lets be honest
Whos the most Bombest and the hardest ?
Im the Most Darkest Artist that was not born in August
My Fan base is the Largest
My potential is Promised to be the most Modest
Im the Most Cleverest and Harshest
D12-Magic A.K.A The Smartest

I own this place its my Sector
Bitches just Bicker and make corny Jesters talking to me like its a Lecture
I'll Beat all the Dexter looking people wearing turtle neck Sweater's to death with a Feather
Whether the Weather is Wetter then Ever im Better than all the Competitors
Being the best is my Pleasure
Slamming n!ggas like a Wrestler. Im the new Embezzler
My Texture is the Center of every Venture
Ill destroy all im A Wrecker who's should not be Reckoned with by a ISH Member
Haters Bow Down or get hit with my Compressor's
My Shit is to big to Measure
Im every ones Mentor
Flow harder than Ghost rider drinking an Alka Seltzer
This was not an Error I was born to bring Terror
Im not Criticizing other's just speaking the truth Im the Inspector
nice! A doesn't rhyme with B but C rhymes with D
E not with F but does rhyme with G... clever homie!

[D12"Magic"]

**** that bitch that trick ass hoe
bend over tramp and stick my pole
LMAO DUDE

[pauk]

this must be amateur night:(

bring it then n1kka wigga?
tired of these ish e-penile slimes.. come on then, move me with your rhymes? :pimp:

[D12"Magic"]

bring it then n1kka wigga?
tired of these ish e-penile slimes.. come on then, move me with your rhymes? :pimp:
:facepalm

[pauk]

:facepalm

http://i304.photobucket.com/albums/nn200/nbacardDOTnet/zz%20NBA%20Photo%20Gallery/z%20Funny%20NBA%20Photos/0%20Players/Michael%20Jordan/1996-97_50.gif

[Fawker]

bring it then n1kka wigga?
tired of these ish e-penile slimes.. come on then, move me with your rhymes? :pimp:
i'm the motherfawker fawker with the suffocating cawker
shove it down your throat and make you gag just call him pauk-er

[D12"Magic"]

i'm the motherfawker fawker with the suffocating cawker
shove it down your throat and make you gag just call him pauk-er
., . . . . . . . . . . .; . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
. . . . . .. . . . . . . . . . . ,.-

[PowerGlove]

^

:oldlol:

I'm below average. I'd PB and I are on the same level.

[mlh1981]

This tall, lanky, white, baseball lovin', Price is Right lovin', guy from the sticks can sure flow like the........good people flow.

[ace23]

What up ISH, already know a ni99a blazed
I get broads, whips, money and never change
I put that shit on the Bible. Shout out my ni99a Bladers.
Ace be leavin y'all stunned, no tasers.
So sharp, watch it son don't get pricked.
Call me LeBron cuz you know I stay producin bricks.
5 minutes, shit, all your ni99a need.
Pack mad techs, like that ni99a Sheed.

[Nevaeh]

Seem like er body wanna Rap today
Yo son put me on, I just released a Mix Tape
Problem is ya style's been done a million times
Boring hook, weak beat and predictable rhymes
Hey yo, look at me, I gotta car and some bling
My swag so outta control, it can dance and sing
Sure..... whatevah n!gga, if it helps you sleep
Time to step ya game up, if you wanna see me.

You say you got rhymes galore, I got more
spittings a hobbie for me, to you it's a chore, straight
Running to the dic-tionary to make sure
that your flow sound smooth, feeling sick to the core
I give more, right off the top of the dome, just run home, and please
Leave the microphone alone
Ya just not ready, willing nor able, to keep things correct like me
or stay stable,

Stab you like Able, as if I was Cane, I remain
untouchable in this hip-hop game
I been known to rearange certain parts of the brain
of Stans who think they see me on ISH, cuzz they Wish
They knew how to flow correct.....Microphone check
spit for a minute and I ain't done yet
But it's time for me to wrap things up
Go outside, get me some air, cuz it's hot as F@CK!!

Raawwww!!

[Saintsfan1992]

I can actually rap not this text shit
im talking actually saying words.

kinda working on my delivery and flow tho. :pimp:

I used to freestyle at school all the time (off the dome)

[Saintsfan1992]

This tall, lanky, white, baseball lovin', Price is Right Watchin', guy from the sticks can sure flow while keepin the bass knockin..

Fixed and enhanced

[NastaMaverick]

http://www.mediafire.com/?5qgb98ux3131twd



playtetris made the beat FYI

[DJmicah]

I can actually rap not this text shit
im talking actually saying words.

kinda working on my delivery and flow tho. :pimp:

I used to freestyle at school all the time (off the dome)
I have a good flow and delivery, I just stumble sometimes because I can't remember all my lyrics, but that can be fixed easily, people tell me I have a flow that resembles andre 3000/lupe/drake

[D12"Magic"]

Any one want to rate?

Lets be honest
Whos the most Bombest and the hardest ?
Im the Most Darkest Artist that was not born in August
My Fan base is the Largest
My potential is Promised to be the most Modest
Im the Most Cleverest and Harshest
D12-Magic A.K.A The Smartest

I own this place its my Sector
Bitches just Bicker and make corny Jesters talking to me like its a Lecture
I'll Beat all the Dexter looking people wearing turtle neck Sweater's to death with a Feather
Whether the Weather is Wetter then Ever im Better than all the Competitors
Being the best is my Pleasure
Slamming n!ggas like a Wrestler. Im the new Embezzler
My Texture is the Center of every Venture
Ill destroy all im A Wrecker who's should not be Reckoned with by a ISH Member
Haters Bow Down or get hit with my Compressor's
My Shit is to big to Measure
Im every ones Mentor
Flow harder than Ghost rider drinking an Alka Seltzer
This was not an Error I was born to bring Terror
Im not Criticizing other's just speaking the truth Im the Inspector

[mcrd101]

Any one want to rate?

Lets be honest
Whos the most Bombest and the hardest ?
Im the Most Darkest Artist that was not born in August
My Fan base is the Largest
My potential is Promised to be the most Modest
Im the Most Cleverest and Harshest
D12-Magic A.K.A The Smartest

I own this place its my Sector
Bitches just Bicker and make corny Jesters talking to me like its a Lecture
I'll Beat all the Dexter looking people wearing turtle neck Sweater's to death with a Feather
Whether the Weather is Wetter then Ever im Better than all the Competitors
Being the best is my Pleasure
Slamming n!ggas like a Wrestler. Im the new Embezzler
My Texture is the Center of every Venture
Ill destroy all im A Wrecker who's should not be Reckoned with by a ISH Member
Haters Bow Down or get hit with my Compressor's
My Shit is to big to Measure
Im every ones Mentor
Flow harder than Ghost rider drinking an Alka Seltzer
This was not an Error I was born to bring Terror
Im not Criticizing other's just speaking the truth Im the Inspector

the flow is good at some parts and i like your rhyme scheme but some lines i thought were too lengthy (ex: I'll Beat all the Dexter looking people wearing turtle neck Sweater's to death with a Feather)

this thread makes me want to write more. my problem is i usually can put rhymes together at this point but either can't come up with concepts or cant put the words together where it makes sense :lol

overall this thread is really good, DJmicah i like your flow and i like mr im so rad's vocab and wordplay

[Nevaeh]

I can actually rap not this text shit
im talking actually saying words.

kinda working on my delivery and flow tho. :pimp:

I used to freestyle at school all the time (off the dome)

The easiest way to get your flow down, is to write your lyrics first, say them a few times in your head or out loud. Then pick your favorite Hip Hop instrumental that's your preferred speed then rhyme over the beat. You may have to add, or take away a few words, but it helps you to slot your lyrical intent into the song comfortably.

Sometimes a flow that feels good when you read it won't always fit into a song's beat properly.

Fun Thread BTW OP. I hadn't rhymed in ages :oldlol:

[ace23]

Would anyone be in a "Diss the poster above you" thread? 4 bars per post.

[DJmicah]

Would anyone be in a "Diss the poster above you" thread? 4 bars per post.
I don't battle but I'm sure some of these guys would

[ace23]

I don't battle but I'm sure some of these guys would
Yeah, I'm trying to get a count; I don't want the same guys going back and forth.

[DJmicah]

The easiest way to get your flow down, is to write your lyrics first, say them a few times in your head or out loud. Then pick your favorite Hip Hop instrumental that's your preferred speed then rhyme over the beat. You may have to add, or take away a few words, but it helps you to slot your lyrical intent into the song comfortably.

Sometimes a flow that feels good when you read it won't always fit into a song's beat properly.

Fun Thread BTW OP. I hadn't rhymed in ages :oldlol:
this is how it's done, I can just take or add words on the fly when spittin on a beat, but yeah you relly have to keep spittin over the beat alot to see what changes need to be made so you don't sound like a dummy when you rap it, your lyrics may be great but if you're offbeat then you suck(ghost writer maybe?)

[D12"Magic"]

Verse 1:
This ain't a Rap this is a Chase
Trying to Chase Rap so I wont be stuck in this Place
This is a Pace That I can keep up with
Just don't know if I could finish this Race
These memories are to dark to Erase
I Embrace every moment I get
Working a Sweat ain't getting me nowhere Yet
Im stumbling on my Shoe Lace
Every time I get up I fall flat on my Face
Wheres that money I Misplaced?
This was not how I was Brought Up
But Now its Caught Up
And I feel Disgraced
Nothing Around me just an empty Space
Gotta Retrace my past no matter how bad it Aches
Still stuck with this bad taste

Verse 2:
I wish these bad moments will Evaporate
I need to Create a new path to Take
But at this Rate im past my Due Date
I wanna live in my own personal Estate
I also want Golden Gates
This Dinner plate does not have enough in it
I try to take my memories and pin it
But they wont go down till I make a Clean Slate
Im bout to go into Overdrive and Decapitate
Everyone straight up but Wait
I did Not know this was what Depression was gonna Bring To Me
I wanna be influential enough to have Birds Sing To Me
Sounds weird but iv'e been lonely enough
These times are rough and tough
I need to hear something to give me hope
I could be Dope but it just wont Matter
If no one is here to here my Chatter

Verse 3:
All my Dreams have just been Crushed
It has denied my Lust
It is now time to Brush
Im Cleaning off This Dust
Just one moment I Hush
Then I leave and Rush
Bout to Blow Up
But first I need to Grow Up
As I Flush these dark memories I Let em Drown
There's a Sudden sound
The ground split like my parents
Hope ascended above to my inherent s
There was a light that brought me to my father
That I probably seen once
He probably ain't want to be Bothered
So I Left and went on an open Stage
Everything began to change
A Huge Fan Base took Range
There was a crowd
Who could here what I Speak Aloud

[D12"Magic"]

Would anyone be in a "Diss the poster above you" thread? 4 bars per post.
Depends how many cats will be in it

[Saintsfan1992]

The easiest way to get your flow down, is to write your lyrics first, say them a few times in your head or out loud. Then pick your favorite Hip Hop instrumental that's your preferred speed then rhyme over the beat. You may have to add, or take away a few words, but it helps you to slot your lyrical intent into the song comfortably.

Sometimes a flow that feels good when you read it won't always fit into a song's beat properly.

Fun Thread BTW OP. I hadn't rhymed in ages :oldlol:

I shall use this.

I heard writing to the beat as well can help.:cheers:

[DJmicah]

ok I've never dropped a G and my pockets lean but that doesn't mean I can't drop the heat, do you have to be Gangsta,most of yall is just a bad kid but I won't spank ya, you guys say you get money but is that really true, the way you are perceived is that really you,u wear red but on the inside you're feeling blue,u were ment to do more than stealing dudes,ps3s stereos and tvs so they can't see the espys or listen to cds, if you didn't give the game a bad name we wouldve been straight, if you lived up to your potential you couldve been great

[Nevaeh]

You grabbed me when I was down and out
When I had my Doubts
No one to talk to so I wanted to shout
A reassuring voice, that's what you are to me
When I was lost, and unsure of my destiny
You said "Baby it'll be alright".....
On those days when all I did was toss and turn all night
or wanted to fight,or scream out "Damn- God- Why"
you were there to wipe the tear from my eye, now I try
to make heads or tails of it all, hoping God is watching and don't let me fall
into the abyss that the Main Demon set for me
keep me on the a path that'll make this story
Have a happy ending...so I'm sending My love and best wishes to you, My-boo
Praying that your love stay true, in a sin filled world
All I really have is God and you.

[DJmicah]

You grabbed me when I was down and out
When I had my Doubts
No one to talk to so I wanted to shout
A reassuring voice, that's what you are to me
When I was lost, and unsure of my destiny
You said "Baby it'll be alright".....
On those days when all I did was toss and turn all night
or wanted to fight,or scream out "Damn- God- Why"
you were there to wipe the tear from my eye, now I try
to make heads or tails of it all, hoping God is watching and don't let me fall
into the abyss that the Main Demon set for me
keep me on the a path that'll make this story
Have a happy ending...so I'm sending My love and best wishes to you, My-boo
Praying that your love stay true, in a sin filled world
All I really have is God and you.
that's great, I'd add some multis in there but that's just my preference, I love having tons of multis in my verses

[Nevaeh]

that's great, I'd add some multis in there but that's just my preference, I love having tons of multis in my verses

Thanks DJ, u can tell that was off the top of the dome. I would have to really concentrate to get those multi's in there. Funny, but I really hadn't been writing in a long time. I used Multis in that battle verse I posted though.

I split the song up with 70s, 80s and 90s style verses just to have some fun. I really appreciate your work too :cheers:

[DJmicah]

Thanks DJ, u can tell that was off the top of the dome. I would have to really concentrate to get those multi's in there. Funny, but I really hadn't been writing in a long time. I used Multis in that battle verse I posted though.

I split the song up with 70s, 80s and 90s style verses just to have some fun. I really appreciate your work too :cheers:
I try to use atleast 2 syllable rhymes in my freestyles, it's hard but I'm getting better, I think I'm too much of a perfectionist, I'm such a sucker for multis that 1 syllable rhymes seem simple to me, all of my writtens don't even have one 1 syllable rhyme(unless in the middle of a verse)because I always have to be perfect, I guess it's just me

[Nevaeh]

I try to use atleast 2 syllable rhymes in my freestyles, it's hard but I'm getting better, I think I'm too much of a perfectionist, I'm such a sucker for multis that 1 syllable rhymes seem simple to me, all of my writtens don't even have one 1 syllable rhyme(unless in the middle of a verse)because I always have to be perfect, I guess it's just me

And ain't nothing wrong with that:oldlol:

That's what makes Hip Hop so cool, because some people's strong point is Multi's, others are better with singles, etc. I think it all depends on what head space you're in and what your motivation was at the time that you were writing.

For me today, it was just about having fun and contributing to the thread, showing another side of myself. For others, who may be pursuing a career in Hip Hop, that "perfectionist" mentality is definitely the Head Space you want to be in.

[DJmicah]

And ain't nothing wrong with that:oldlol:

That's what makes Hip Hop so cool, because some people's strong point is Multi's, others are better with singles, etc. I think it all depends on what head space you're in and what your motivation was at the time that you were writing.

For me today, it was just about having fun and contributing to the thread, showing another side of myself. For others, who may be pursuing a career in Hip Hop, that "perfectionist" mentality is definitely the Head Space you want to be in.
yeah I like Andre 3000, lupe and Em but I wanna be like percee p, that guy is a multis GOD, I have eargasms listening to him

[Nevaeh]

yeah I like Andre 3000, lupe and Em but I wanna be like percee p, that guy is a multis GOD, I have eargasms listening to him

Since I'm older now, I prefer to go back and forth on the different styles. Sometimes an Emcee can make you feel like you're in class trying to follow the Teacher's instructions when you're dead tired. :oldlol:

But, yeah If you grew up with Hip Hop, it's not hard to keep up with at all, regardless of wordplay style. You just have to be in that particular zone to "feel" the lyrics.

[L.Kizzle]

Yall talkin bout battlin?

[DJmicah]

Since I'm older now, I prefer to go back and forth on the different styles. Sometimes an Emcee can make you feel like you're in class trying to follow the Teacher's instructions when you're dead tired. :oldlol:

But, yeah If you grew up with Hip Hop, it's not hard to keep up with at all, regardless of wordplay style. You just have to be in that particular zone to "feel" the lyrics.
yeah I like lots of different styles, and everybodys great but I just feel hella humbled when this guys rippin eminem and makin fat joe implode: http://m.youtube.com/watch?gl=US&hl=en&client=mv-google&v=os7y_xrTDIw plus nobody knows him but he's that good, makes you wonder what really sells these days...

[ace23]

Yall talkin bout battlin?
H-Town :rockon:

[D12"Magic"]

I try to use atleast 2 syllable rhymes in my freestyles, it's hard but I'm getting better, I think I'm too much of a perfectionist, I'm such a sucker for multis that 1 syllable rhymes seem simple to me, all of my writtens don't even have one 1 syllable rhyme(unless in the middle of a verse)because I always have to be perfect, I guess it's just me
I love to use multiple syllables also. Thats's when im at my best.

[D12"Magic"]

Yo ac3 lets get that thread going i got some punch lines

[L.Kizzle]

Yo ac3 lets get that thread going i got some punch lines
Hell yeah, lets go ... I'm ready!

[ace23]

Yo ac3 lets get that thread going i got some punch lines

Let's hear em.

[Draz]

Imma do a lil freestyle.

Lemme lay it down on you, lemme hold you squeeze you them other girls see you with me they wanna be you. Give me all you got, girl lemme lay it down on you on this spot, puttin' it down on you, puttin' it down on you make the coldest bed hot. Seductive talkin' inbetween ya ears, baby I could see you scared but whenever you need me I'll be there, I'll be there to tell you everything's gonna be alright, dispite all we goin' through them other girls still beggin to be you. Put my life on the line, I'll take a shot maybe two, a glock maybe two, I get popped but I'll do it all for you.

;] the new trey songz up in dis bih

[Nevaeh]

I love to use multiple syllables also. Thats's when im at my best.

So ya say you like multi's, I like malty frostys with a side of french fries that's salty,
Yeah I know I'm faulty..trying to rhyme when the time is late on the east coast I'll halt these..
Lame lyrics thats even got me wonderin' when summer ends will I be left alone with no friends
Had to spit- some in the thread to keep it going, I'm flowing, with a lame ass rhyme that's goin.........Noweeeeeeeeeaaaarrrrr!!

[Scholar]

Hey, guys, I don't know how I missed this thread, but I rap(ped). Last time I recorded a song was back in March. I bought myself some home equipment, but I don't even use it... :confusedshrug: My love for music has been dying slowly.
If you guys want, check out this song I recorded. Let me know what you think.
Scholar - Life Can Get Better (http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=10410511&q=hi&newref=1)

[D12"Magic"]

:applause:
Sometimes to kill time
I spill rhymes
And realize
That my flows are for real rap goons and real guys
In the boons I reside
With the coons and the crimes
Like the news, Channel 9
Keep yo tool on yo side
Understand, I'm in another world when I'm on the mic
I should win a Cy Young with the way I pitch the white
Only time that you ever ride is when you on a bike
The only time you ever got punch is when you in a fight
They won't get that, so I'm a dumb it down for 'em
They dug they own career a hole, I just put it in the ground for 'em

That was great

[D12"Magic"]

The Rage I Release is like Telekinesis
The Page's I Cease are Master-Pieces
From this Cage im Unleashed
I Don't Age I just Decease
The dark Gauge in me Fleeces
This Minimum Wage can't cure These Diseases
Im in that Certain Stage where I cant Piece the right Pieces
There's this Sage in me that wont leave and my flow steadily Increases
When im done my Energy Decrease's
It Decapitates and Reaches out and Impeaches

[ace23]

:applause:
That was great
Yeah Rad, your flow is on point.

[Nevaeh]

Thanks for the props guys

Yeah, you ripped that lyric Rad. Think Ima have to visit OTC more often. Seems I get along with peeps better here than in the NBA thread :oldlol:

[D12"Magic"]

Yeah, you ripped that lyric Rad. Think Ima have to visit OTC more often. Seems I get along with peeps better here than in the NBA thread :oldlol:
I don't even go in the NBA Forum. Its horrible.

[DJmicah]

to remember the name by fort minor:
wanna know why they remember my name when I spray, cuz I'm different from guys you listenin to drivin round on a friday, jeezy and weezys fans come my way,i keep the transportation to a new nation like a drive way,so sick you can't cure me if you've heard me you kno I'm great

[DJmicah]

Hey, guys, I don't know how I missed this thread, but I rap(ped). Last time I recorded a song was back in March. I bought myself some home equipment, but I don't even use it... :confusedshrug: My love for music has been dying slowly.
If you guys want, check out this song I recorded. Let me know what you think.
Scholar - Life Can Get Better (http://www.soundclick.com/player/single_player.cfm?songid=10410511&q=hi&newref=1)
dang that was some real ISH(get it?) i liked it but the chorus wasnt that catchy

[DJmicah]

what does any of this even mean?

wanna know why they remember my name when I spray,
wanna know why they remember me when i spit

cuz I'm different from guys you listenin to drivin round on a friday
im different from the average rappers u bump in the hood

jeezy and weezys fans come my way,
the fans come to me because im deeper and different(no hoes clothes and guns)

i keep the transportation to a new nation like a drive way,
by listening to artists that arent garbage we can transport rap back to the golden ages

so sick you can't cure me if you've heard me you kno I'm great
it speaks for itself
did i mention ima fan of Lupe?

[DJmicah]

i meant the random lines with no context, but i guess that was the intention.
you want ment to interpret EVERYTHING i posted?
http://www.istockphoto.com/file_thumbview_approve/3152404/2/istockphoto_3152404-shocked.jpg

[DJmicah]

I'm in this click when I decend this ship, no need for acendin quick just spittin quick, get this whip, I don't wanna get bit quick but I hate leagues that tell stories like the president is sick, and theres many who resent this prick,because they know they can be outmendin him...i bet youll love that

[ace23]

http://www.4shared.com/mp3/BaCnhCWU/file.html

:pimp:

[Draz]

Imma do a lil freestyle.

Lemme lay it down on you, lemme hold you squeeze you them other girls see you with me they wanna be you. Give me all you got, girl lemme lay it down on you on this spot, puttin' it down on you, puttin' it down on you make the coldest bed hot. Seductive talkin' inbetween ya ears, baby I could see you scared but whenever you need me I'll be there, I'll be there to tell you everything's gonna be alright, dispite all we goin' through them other girls still beggin to be you. Put my life on the line, I'll take a shot maybe two, a glock maybe two, I get popped but I'll do it all for you.

;] the new trey songz up in dis bih
God dam, was a lil sexual deviant back in the way back