new bars for that ass

[ace23]

https://soundcloud.com/slihmm/slihmm-grace-prod-brothermoon

[Norcaliblunt]

Having orgies with Helen Keller and Ann Frank
Penn and Teller and that damn skank... Caitlyn Jenner
Picking Bilderburg warning a billion nerds
How we're about to be killed and served as Satan's dinner
Flogging my slong watching ya mom
Get DPed with Freddy and Jason in her
This acquired taste is bitter

[Lamar Doom]

Same critique I always have for you- you are a very good rapper, but there is nothing distinguishable about you as a unique individual. Spill your guts man, there's too many rappers out there, need to hear YOUR voice or you'll just be lost in the crowd. Why would it break your mother's heart to hear where your head is at? From the soul, you have the tools, gotta be fearless with your perspective.

[ace23]

Same critique I always have for you- you are a very good rapper, but there is nothing distinguishable about you as a unique individual. Spill your guts man, there's too many rappers out there, need to hear YOUR voice or you'll just be lost in the crowd. Why would it break your mother's heart to hear where your head is at? From the soul, you have the tools, gotta be fearless with your perspective.
Lol my life too boring for you bra sorry

[Lamar Doom]

Lol my life too boring for you bra sorry


No man, you can do this, I'm just trying to tell you what I think is preventing you from being able to do this for a living. You are the only guy that's ever posted raps on here that I think could get on. But I've heard the equivalent of "I used to play ball with a guy who's in jail, I don't give a f*ck" a million different ways. I wanna hear your shit and have some understanding of you as an individual, not just a good rapper brushing over themes I've heard before.

[navy]

Make a concept album(mixtape) about shit that never happened if you must and make sure the songs connect.

[ace23]

Make a concept album(mixtape) about shit that never happened if you must and make sure the songs connect.
Lol I can respect people who do that but I'm just I want to talk about myself not some character.

[Pushxx]

You have a smooth sound but need some varied inflection in some of your sentences. I'm not an Eminem fan but he is great at changing the flow and rhythm between sentences/verses and varies his tone sentence to sentence.

Hard to explain what I mean.

[nathanjizzle]

you are pretty mediocre.

[Bless Mathews]

Not bad.


Good last bOar

[ace23]

Thanks for the comments.

[ace23]

This heat af y'all sleep

[ace23]

1k bump

[ace23]

Bump

[red1]

pretty good bro. keep doing your thing

[ace23]

^Thanks.

2k bump

[detroitkid816]

you're pretty good man. we should collab your beat tastes are pretty similar to my own. that brothermoon dude is dope

[ace23]

you're pretty good man. we should collab your beat tastes are pretty similar to my own. that brothermoon dude is dope
Link your shit

[ace23]

3k bump

[RidonKs]

i agree with lamar

i don't believe what ur saying. it feels a bit uninspired.

you don't have to change the subject and start rapping about your feelings or real life like grocery shopping.... but nor do you have to be so outright violent which honestly i'm not sure sells in the genre so much anymore :lol

you can be angry without being incoherent





but dat beat :bowdown:

and spit too :applause:

[ace23]

i agree with lamar

i don't believe what ur saying. it feels a bit uninspired.

you don't have to change the subject and start rapping about your feelings or real life like grocery shopping.... but nor do you have to be so outright violent which honestly i'm not sure sells in the genre so much anymore :lol

you can be angry without being incoherent





but dat beat :bowdown:

and spit too :applause:
...This is all real dude idk what you're talking about. What don't you believe?

Thanks for listening.

[RidonKs]

probably it doesn't ring true for me because i'm not your demographic :lol

[ace23]

probably it doesn't ring true for me because i'm not your demographic :lol
Lol...ok

[ace23]

4k bump fwm

[ace23]

5k bump

[Bosnian Sajo]

boo this man, booooooooooooooo

[Micku]

Love the beat, but didn't like the rap. The beat was butchered the moment a word was spoken. It was like you took a majestic animal and slaughtered with a used bloody hatchet. I still gave it a shot, and it just didn't compliment with each other. It wasn't smooth for me, and it could've been a lot better. The opening could've been better. Maybe you need another beat.

Anyway, keep at it if it's your passion. It wasn't for me tho. Dat beat was nice.

[TheSilentKiller]

for real tho, how you been doing this for 3+ years and are still so bad at mixing?

[$LakerGold]

Ace, you listened to the critics and have actually improved -- if this is you. You're actually there, you just need to work on creativity now.

It's Vanilla.

[ace23]

for real tho, how you been doing this for 3+ years and are still so bad at mixing?
Lol the haters done ran out of material.

[ace23]

Love the beat, but didn't like the rap. The beat was butchered the moment a word was spoken. It was like you took a majestic animal and slaughtered with a used bloody hatchet. I still gave it a shot, and it just didn't compliment with each other. It wasn't smooth for me, and it could've been a lot better. The opening could've been better. Maybe you need another beat.

Anyway, keep at it if it's your passion. It wasn't for me tho. Dat beat was nice.
Improve your taste in hip-hop.


Ace, you listened to the critics and have actually improved -- if this is you. You're actually there, you just need to work on creativity now.

It's Vanilla.
Ain't nobody listen to ISH critics lol. They don't know what they're talking about. I'm critically acclaimed already. I only post my shit here for plays.

Thanks for listening tho

[nathanjizzle]

Improve your taste in hip-hop.


Ain't nobody listen to ISH critics lol. They don't know what they're talking about. I'm critically acclaimed already. I only post my shit here for plays.

Thanks for listening tho

Well fuc you too then.

[ace23]

Well fuc you too then.
Why you quit rapping?

[$LakerGold]

Improve your taste in hip-hop.


Ain't nobody listen to ISH critics lol. They don't know what they're talking about. I'm critically acclaimed already. I only post my shit here for plays.

Thanks for listening tho
They all had a point from 3,2,1 years ago.

[ace23]

Yo repost the Lemonade verse you had me listen to on PSN.

I can't hear your accent as much as before. Not bad though
Lol I don't even remember that. Had to have been 3 years ago at least.

Y'all weird. This is my favorite track I've recorded.

[ace23]

6k bump new shit next week

[ace23]

7k bump

[ace23]

8k

[Bosnian Sajo]

You'll never get anywhere with all those 1 minute snippets, make an actual song.

[ace23]

You'll never get anywhere with all those 1 minute snippets, make an actual song.
Bet?