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ace23
06-16-2016, 10:27 PM
https://soundcloud.com/slihmm/slihmm-ruins-prod-chance-schreiber
ace23
06-17-2016, 01:25 PM
bump
DonDadda59
06-17-2016, 01:29 PM
bump

Now THAT (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GD_qTRDbXno) was a rapster song. :hammertime:
macmac
06-17-2016, 02:16 PM
Nice track. your voice is good, I feel like you need more presence at the end of your bars, maybe cuz you lose a bit of breath you tend to trail off or mumble when you should emphasize the rhyme. Examples: why would I trust them, low on stacks..., three fifth humans. Those came off mediocre.

Good pronunciation on the multi syllables. Lyrics were pretty good, liked the Booth line and from there your flow was nice, how you switched it up.

"Put your hand upon my mic, you might get introduced to Christ..." Had an Outkast vibe to it

Good job, you definitely got a lot better
ROCSteady
06-17-2016, 03:10 PM
Your hobby has birthed some ripe fruit this time around.


Salutations
ace23
06-17-2016, 11:34 PM
Cool bump
ace23
06-18-2016, 07:15 PM
fwm
ROCSteady
06-18-2016, 07:25 PM
It's always good to have a hobby bro.


Everyone needs an outlet
ace23
06-19-2016, 03:06 PM
Yeah shit's great
ace23
06-20-2016, 12:27 PM
bump
Pushxx
06-20-2016, 12:32 PM
Other than sounding out of breath the whole time, that was pretty sick...beat included.
ace23
06-21-2016, 12:38 PM
Other than sounding out of breath the whole time, that was pretty sick...beat included.
Thanks
ace23
06-28-2016, 05:06 PM
bump
Bosnian Sajo
06-28-2016, 05:39 PM
Pretty dope. Keep working, make an actual song with a hook. Easier said than done, I understand, but focus on that more than 1 minute snippets.
ace23
06-29-2016, 02:59 PM
Pretty dope. Keep working, make an actual song with a hook. Easier said than done, I understand, but focus on that more than 1 minute snippets.
Cool

New: https://soundcloud.com/slihmm/slihmm-solo-prod-drwn
$LakerGold
06-29-2016, 08:49 PM
It became sick when you started to really express yourself towards the end. I don't know the terminology for it in rap, but in my definition, it's when you pronounce words clearly and you combine it with rapping -- there's that certain flow in rap that gets me tuned-in. Obviously, the flow was great from mid til' the end, it's not eminem level lol but it's there, I enjoyed it. Good shit.
ace23
06-30-2016, 01:33 PM
It became sick when you started to really express yourself towards the end. I don't know the terminology for it in rap, but in my definition, it's when you pronounce words clearly and you combine it with rapping -- there's that certain flow in rap that gets me tuned-in. Obviously, the flow was great from mid til' the end, it's not eminem level lol but it's there, I enjoyed it. Good shit.
Lol