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andgar923
06-20-2016, 11:54 AM
Hate to spam the board with beats, I have dozens upon dozens more so I only share a few here and there. But I need feedback on this one since I don't make trap beats.

Aside from the trap style that I pick up from everyone around, I don't listen to it, nor do I pay it much mind. Some beats are okay, just not my cup.

But I decided to give it a shot, I need feedback cause I don't really know enough about it to critique it myself.

https://soundcloud.com/agua-1/trap

I don't find the technical aspects an issue, I just don't get the groove/format due to my lack of experience with this style.

So here it is, a very basic rough draft of a beat.

gigantes
06-20-2016, 12:52 PM
I don't know who taught you English, but it seems like they were pretty much just f-cking with you, mate.

beats what, traps board... WTF?

are you trying to get a GF or something? in any case. this is not the way. it's just too hilarious, no?

Nick Young
06-20-2016, 01:59 PM
I can't lie dude, sounds like the kind of thing me and my friends used to make on Apple Garage band in 7th grade.

You got to add more of your style in to it dude, and some more interesting instrument choices. This is as generic as it can possibly get.

I applaud the effort made, but start trying to do something different rather than generic garageband style songs.

Good luck, keep at it!

All the songs on your soundcloud are the same type of generic garagebandy sounding ish. Step your game up if you want ISH to bend the knee to your beats.

andgar923
06-21-2016, 09:03 AM
lol so I guess I should give up on Trap, no biggie not my thing.

@Nick.... I would love to hear the generic stuff you made on Garage Band. I can take criticism no problem, but most of my music is not generic.

Either way, thanks for at least listening.