Re: "Story Of My Life ft. Jay-A" [I'm even sing a few bars in this one!]
trust and believe when i tell you that you aren't doing yourself any favors by calling yourself Jay-A.
I don't wanna shit on your effort and work but it sounds very underground--bush league-type stuff....if you're going to rap do it all the way live man pay for a little studio time and stop making these guerrilla ass songs that aren't mastered and timed right.
I don't hate it but you guys' sound needs work if you plan on rapping for real....if it's just a hobby then it's all good then man do you.
(I kinda dig rappers that disregard form for the sake of what they want to say so I like that aspect of your style)