Just read from start to finish, bravo. Suspense was thick throughout and great fight sequences with a saucy devious sex scene.
I am inspired to make brain posts, avoid naruprude, kobe threads and use troll logic whenever Euroleague is about. Your spreading awareness and thread safety guidelines to rookie posters.
As a budding comic book writer/artist myself i will immediately re read and take notes on some of the finer subtleties of your story telling.