Who on Insidehoops can Rap?

[D12"Magic"]

i'm the motherfawker fawker with the suffocating cawker
shove it down your throat and make you gag just call him pauk-er

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[PowerGlove]

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I'm below average. I'd PB and I are on the same level.

[mlh1981]

This tall, lanky, white, baseball lovin', Price is Right lovin', guy from the sticks can sure flow like the........good people flow.

[ace23]

What up ISH, already know a ni99a blazed
I get broads, whips, money and never change
I put that shit on the Bible. Shout out my ni99a Bladers.
Ace be leavin y'all stunned, no tasers.
So sharp, watch it son don't get pricked.
Call me LeBron cuz you know I stay producin bricks.
5 minutes, shit, all your ni99a need.
Pack mad techs, like that ni99a Sheed.

[Nevaeh]

Seem like er body wanna Rap today
Yo son put me on, I just released a Mix Tape
Problem is ya style's been done a million times
Boring hook, weak beat and predictable rhymes
Hey yo, look at me, I gotta car and some bling
My swag so outta control, it can dance and sing
Sure..... whatevah n!gga, if it helps you sleep
Time to step ya game up, if you wanna see me.

You say you got rhymes galore, I got more
spittings a hobbie for me, to you it's a chore, straight
Running to the dic-tionary to make sure
that your flow sound smooth, feeling sick to the core
I give more, right off the top of the dome, just run home, and please
Leave the microphone alone
Ya just not ready, willing nor able, to keep things correct like me
or stay stable,

Stab you like Able, as if I was Cane, I remain
untouchable in this hip-hop game
I been known to rearange certain parts of the brain
of Stans who think they see me on ISH, cuzz they Wish
They knew how to flow correct.....Microphone check
spit for a minute and I ain't done yet
But it's time for me to wrap things up
Go outside, get me some air, cuz it's hot as F@CK!!

Raawwww!!

[Saintsfan1992]

I can actually rap not this text shit
im talking actually saying words.

kinda working on my delivery and flow tho.

I used to freestyle at school all the time (off the dome)

[Saintsfan1992]

This tall, lanky, white, baseball lovin', Price is Right Watchin', guy from the sticks can sure flow while keepin the bass knockin..

Fixed and enhanced

[NastaMaverick]

http://www.mediafire.com/?5qgb98ux3131twd



playtetris made the beat FYI

[DJmicah]

I can actually rap not this text shit
im talking actually saying words.

kinda working on my delivery and flow tho.

I used to freestyle at school all the time (off the dome)

I have a good flow and delivery, I just stumble sometimes because I can't remember all my lyrics, but that can be fixed easily, people tell me I have a flow that resembles andre 3000/lupe/drake

[D12"Magic"]

Any one want to rate?

Lets be honest
Whos the most Bombest and the hardest ?
Im the Most Darkest Artist that was not born in August
My Fan base is the Largest
My potential is Promised to be the most Modest
Im the Most Cleverest and Harshest
D12-Magic A.K.A The Smartest

I own this place its my Sector
Bitches just Bicker and make corny Jesters talking to me like its a Lecture
I'll Beat all the Dexter looking people wearing turtle neck Sweater's to death with a Feather
Whether the Weather is Wetter then Ever im Better than all the Competitors
Being the best is my Pleasure
Slamming n!ggas like a Wrestler. Im the new Embezzler
My Texture is the Center of every Venture
Ill destroy all im A Wrecker who's should not be Reckoned with by a ISH Member
Haters Bow Down or get hit with my Compressor's
My Shit is to big to Measure
Im every ones Mentor
Flow harder than Ghost rider drinking an Alka Seltzer
This was not an Error I was born to bring Terror
Im not Criticizing other's just speaking the truth Im the Inspector

[mcrd101]

Any one want to rate?

Lets be honest
Whos the most Bombest and the hardest ?
Im the Most Darkest Artist that was not born in August
My Fan base is the Largest
My potential is Promised to be the most Modest
Im the Most Cleverest and Harshest
D12-Magic A.K.A The Smartest

I own this place its my Sector
Bitches just Bicker and make corny Jesters talking to me like its a Lecture
I'll Beat all the Dexter looking people wearing turtle neck Sweater's to death with a Feather
Whether the Weather is Wetter then Ever im Better than all the Competitors
Being the best is my Pleasure
Slamming n!ggas like a Wrestler. Im the new Embezzler
My Texture is the Center of every Venture
Ill destroy all im A Wrecker who's should not be Reckoned with by a ISH Member
Haters Bow Down or get hit with my Compressor's
My Shit is to big to Measure
Im every ones Mentor
Flow harder than Ghost rider drinking an Alka Seltzer
This was not an Error I was born to bring Terror
Im not Criticizing other's just speaking the truth Im the Inspector

the flow is good at some parts and i like your rhyme scheme but some lines i thought were too lengthy (ex: I'll Beat all the Dexter looking people wearing turtle neck Sweater's to death with a Feather)

this thread makes me want to write more. my problem is i usually can put rhymes together at this point but either can't come up with concepts or cant put the words together where it makes sense

overall this thread is really good, DJmicah i like your flow and i like mr im so rad's vocab and wordplay

[Nevaeh]

I can actually rap not this text shit
im talking actually saying words.

kinda working on my delivery and flow tho.

I used to freestyle at school all the time (off the dome)

The easiest way to get your flow down, is to write your lyrics first, say them a few times in your head or out loud. Then pick your favorite Hip Hop instrumental that's your preferred speed then rhyme over the beat. You may have to add, or take away a few words, but it helps you to slot your lyrical intent into the song comfortably.

Sometimes a flow that feels good when you read it won't always fit into a song's beat properly.

Fun Thread BTW OP. I hadn't rhymed in ages

[ace23]

Would anyone be in a "Diss the poster above you" thread? 4 bars per post.

[DJmicah]

Would anyone be in a "Diss the poster above you" thread? 4 bars per post.

I don't battle but I'm sure some of these guys would

[ace23]

I don't battle but I'm sure some of these guys would

Yeah, I'm trying to get a count; I don't want the same guys going back and forth.