I rapped over music again.

[ace23]

Pretty much what LD said. You sound good on the track, have good flow and I don't feel like I'm listening to some amateur rapper. There's nothing wrong with it but there's also nothing that sets this apart from a lot of other tracks I've heard.

You do sound like you have a lot of potential though. If this was all I heard of a tape, I'd give the rest of it a listen. Stuff is getting a lot better man.

Alright, should start recording for a tape when I get a new mic later this year.

[ace23]

Bump one time tho

[Rondo]

Nice man.

I think you should ether NathanJizzle for his disrespect though!

[Lamar Doom]

I had a couple ideas for you.

First is maybe more of an exercise, do a verse or verses on one topic. it can be some well worn cliche shit like "weed" or "sex" or you could get weird with it and do "artificial intelligence" or "abortion" or some shit. Just pick one theme, think about all the shit that you think about it, all the shit you think the general public thinks about it, then riff. Maybe not something you want to build a mixtape around but might get you off of just doing sort of general, broad bars.

Then I had an idea for a project where you represent several different voices in hip hop. Be like "The 7 P's" or some shit. Preacher, poet, prophet, pimp, pusher, police, punk (just an example, make it your own). And you could either have them each be totally made up characters where you're like telling a story through these characters or you could just sort of filter yourself through the parts of you that relate to those archetypes. Like, you're obviously not a real pimp who's procuring women but you could have the "pimp" part express your lusty side, and the preacher part express all the ways that you feel righteous and maybe even sanctimonious, the poet express all sorts of abstract and creative bars, the pusher express the ways you've gotten f*cked up, and so on. Be a cool way to flex some different styles and touch on all sorts of shit.

[ace23]

Lol, cute, I'll think about it.

EDIT: You're 36? Damn you're ****ing dirt.

[ace23]

Nice man.

I think you should ether NathanJizzle for his disrespect though!

Thanks.

And I should, shouldn't I?

[ace23]

This ni[COLOR="Black"]gga[/COLOR] wrote nice things about me.

[Smook A.]

Yo Ace make a diss song about NathanJizzle. He talks too much shit

[nathanjizzle]

Yo Ace make a diss song about NathanJizzle. He talks too much shit

pls do it *****, so i can dust off my mic. and while im slaying you i will slay L3B120N J4M35 too. and smook A and rondo.

[Smook A.]

pls do it *****, so i can dust off my mic. and while im slaying you i will slay L3B120N J4M35 too. and smook A and rondo.

I'd like to see you try

[ace23]

pls do it *****, so i can dust off my mic. and while im slaying you i will slay L3B120N J4M35 too. and smook A and rondo.

Do it. You go first.

[ace23]

Shameful bump

[ace23]

This little fa[COLOR="Black"]g[/COLOR] had my track removed 'cause it was starting to get too big I guess. Was about 50 plays from 2k. I was talking to dude's manager and he said Psymun snitched to soundcloud.

[KNOW1EDGE]

What's the purpose? Just for fun?

[ace23]

What's the purpose? Just for fun?

Nah