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Old 07-22-2010, 03:45 AM   #16
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hhahaha funny GIF but I didn't expect you to. You prolly were ironing your skinny jeans or trying to learn how to Dougie or sumthin
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Old 07-22-2010, 08:29 AM   #18
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Old 07-22-2010, 07:16 PM   #19
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I really wish Santino would have had a bigger role in the trilogy. He was/is by far my favorite character. I maintain that he could have been an effective don (not as effective as Michael, mind you) had he lived that long. Before the Sollozzo/McCluskey hit, he was starting to bend a little bit, heed Tom's advice, and let sleeping dogs lie (at least temporarily). It was Mike, remember, that convinced them to allow the hit and kick of that firestorm that eventually landed Sonny in the morgue.
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Old 07-22-2010, 08:00 PM   #20
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- F*cking LOVE the descriptive language. "Ominous music" "Grainy colours with red undertones/passion of Italian families." This was offensive to all five senses in da best way possible. If I was a girl I'd orgazm from the sheer amount of emotion each thing elicits.
- Liking the character development and I've read something previously from you about them in a diff thread. Really well done, mix of formal language and ebonical vernacular. Perhaps Fredo could've used a bit more emphasis though, seeing as how his cowardice was important.
- I know you did it before, but you mentioned the sonny's death, and the camera angle being used from his perspective. That was awesome. If you could kindly provide another example.
- Really organized and sequential to follow. Like no excessive sh!t, u clearly defined your topic sentence/theme, and lo and behold the supporting deets were ON POINT. Complex but concise.
- Liked the ending sentence a lot, but it's a wee bit cheezy with the paradox inclusion. I mean when u mentioned the whole baptism/murdering thing it sounded so badazz, but "despite using dark shadows, Godfather glows luminously" is kinda awk, but then again I'm a teenage girl.


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- Wanted a bit more emphasis on the feminist and racist lines. I sensed restraint and rush on your behalf. You probably could've gone days on that, but it's 2010 and b!tchez and minorities want their share of attention.
- Bit more emphasis on Michael's luv relationship.
- Could you touch a little bit on the costumes, you gosh darn ironic fashionista, you?

Lol I can't really find any flaws, just what I personally would've preferred it as. Appreciate the post ROC, gonna spread this around I hope.
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Old 07-25-2010, 11:30 PM   #21
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- F*cking LOVE the descriptive language. "Ominous music" "Grainy colours with red undertones/passion of Italian families." This was offensive to all five senses in da best way possible. If I was a girl I'd orgazm from the sheer amount of emotion each thing elicits.
- Liking the character development and I've read something previously from you about them in a diff thread. Really well done, mix of formal language and ebonical vernacular. Perhaps Fredo could've used a bit more emphasis though, seeing as how his cowardice was important.
- I know you did it before, but you mentioned the sonny's death, and the camera angle being used from his perspective. That was awesome. If you could kindly provide another example.
- Really organized and sequential to follow. Like no excessive sh!t, u clearly defined your topic sentence/theme, and lo and behold the supporting deets were ON POINT. Complex but concise.
- Liked the ending sentence a lot, but it's a wee bit cheezy with the paradox inclusion. I mean when u mentioned the whole baptism/murdering thing it sounded so badazz, but "despite using dark shadows, Godfather glows luminously" is kinda awk, but then again I'm a teenage girl.


Cons
- Wanted a bit more emphasis on the feminist and racist lines. I sensed restraint and rush on your behalf. You probably could've gone days on that, but it's 2010 and b!tchez and minorities want their share of attention.
- Bit more emphasis on Michael's luv relationship.
- Could you touch a little bit on the costumes, you gosh darn ironic fashionista, you?

Lol I can't really find any flaws, just what I personally would've preferred it as. Appreciate the post ROC, gonna spread this around I hope.

Thanks a lot man. Glad you did pros and cons
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Old 07-25-2010, 11:40 PM   #22
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- F*cking LOVE the descriptive language. "Ominous music" "Grainy colours with red undertones/passion of Italian families." This was offensive to all five senses in da best way possible. If I was a girl I'd orgazm from the sheer amount of emotion each thing elicits.
- Liking the character development and I've read something previously from you about them in a diff thread. Really well done, mix of formal language and ebonical vernacular. Perhaps Fredo could've used a bit more emphasis though, seeing as how his cowardice was important.
- I know you did it before, but you mentioned the sonny's death, and the camera angle being used from his perspective. That was awesome. If you could kindly provide another example.
- Really organized and sequential to follow. Like no excessive sh!t, u clearly defined your topic sentence/theme, and lo and behold the supporting deets were ON POINT. Complex but concise.
- Liked the ending sentence a lot, but it's a wee bit cheezy with the paradox inclusion. I mean when u mentioned the whole baptism/murdering thing it sounded so badazz, but "despite using dark shadows, Godfather glows luminously" is kinda awk, but then again I'm a teenage girl.


Cons
- Wanted a bit more emphasis on the feminist and racist lines. I sensed restraint and rush on your behalf. You probably could've gone days on that, but it's 2010 and b!tchez and minorities want their share of attention.
- Bit more emphasis on Michael's luv relationship.
- Could you touch a little bit on the costumes, you gosh darn ironic fashionista, you?

Lol I can't really find any flaws, just what I personally would've preferred it as. Appreciate the post ROC, gonna spread this around I hope.



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Old 07-26-2010, 02:52 AM   #23
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hhahaha funny GIF but I didn't expect you to. You prolly were ironing your skinny jeans or trying to learn how to Dougie or sumthin

both, jokes on you, lol
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Old 07-26-2010, 10:16 AM   #24
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Old 07-27-2010, 04:04 PM   #25
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Precisely. I want Ukplayer4 to check it out though since he's the self-acclaimed film expert round here. Lol he does know his ish. Pete should read too if he likes Godfather.
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Old 07-27-2010, 04:11 PM   #26
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This really need a 'cool story bro' pic. REALLY.

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No hate bro, I like you. No hetero.


haha it's whatever man. I knew only a few select would venture here and offer anything of substance. That "Cool Story Bro" ish is played out.

At least use the "Riveting Tale Chap" one cuz that was funny
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Old 08-01-2012, 09:48 PM   #29
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Old 08-02-2012, 12:43 PM   #30
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sorry, i never saw this first time round.

will read tomorrow and get back to you, whats if for btw?
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