You cant bark. You have absolutely no flow. It sounds like you're just reading off a paper. If you ever fixed this, you'd be better.
You can't do a proper laugh. You made the mic crackle which is a complete beginners mistake.
You want me to get used to you? The only thing Im used to is chuckling then closing your threads as you get a ridiculous amount of unneeded attention.
The lyrics are completely meaningless. Lil Wayne talks about thing that have more point than you.
I just heard the bark again, its just...awkward. in fact, this is all awkward. This is the stuff that if you were at a club and you heard it, all you could do is cringe and wait until it was over.
I think I'm getting better with the flow. Obviously I need work there. Each song im hoping to get better than the previous one. And the barking was sort of impromptu. I think its rather funny.
As far as the lyrics, I think you are totally missing the boat. I think that's my strong suit and show credence to my talent even at the early developmental that I'm at. Listen again to the words. Every bar is connected.
Not to mention, I think I've got the rare trait that bodes well for my future endeavors, which is my product gets better with every listen.
You know you suck when it takes you 10 listens of your OWN material just to get yourself to dare say it's relatively good.
Do you not understand what's going on here? I just picked a microphone up four weeks ago and made the proclamation I WILL have a single on the airwaves within 18 months. To which I also said I would use ISH to chronicle my rise to fame. So when I obviously become good then you and everyone else will know cause I'm go be a star, sucka.