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Old 05-15-2011, 08:25 PM   #1
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hi guys here i have to you my comic i make a few year ago with my friend well there the first season with the freind i hope you have enjoying with it the storyline is there are the teroraist to the world and muffinman have to stop there terrorist with many magics brainstorming and other.

season 1

ep 1

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By theoo at 2007-09-14
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By theoo at 2007-09-15

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Old 05-15-2011, 08:28 PM   #2
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B]season 2[/b] i have make this season on my own not with there friend

ep 4
[IMG] By theoo at 2008-06-06[/IMG]
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By theoo at 2008-06-07
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what you guys do thinking??? i think there many good comics i should make more?? the storyline is a complicated maybe and not enough action to there comic what to you guys think make postings :)
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Old 05-15-2011, 08:55 PM   #3
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I think you're Bruinlove. Not the first time you've made a retarded gimmick like this, plus there's also this thread you made a while ago.

http://www.insidehoops.com/forum/sho...d.php?t=214661

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Old 05-15-2011, 09:01 PM   #4
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I think you're Bruinlove. Not the first time you've made a retarded gimmick like this, plus there's also this thread you made a while ago.

http://www.insidehoops.com/forum/sho...d.php?t=214661
???? man idc what youre think i am what to you think of the comic??
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Old 05-15-2011, 09:02 PM   #5
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Old 05-15-2011, 09:06 PM   #6
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First ditch the blue/black background. It provides poor contrast to the primary image.

Second the text is hard to read. Make it bigger or do what they do in comics with the opaque white bubbles. It's easier to read that way. Also the sound effects should be bigger and bolder text. If you're using Photoshop or a similar program also try applying some simple transformations to the text like bulge out, drop shadow or rotate it a bit.

Finally, there are lot of empty, wasted panels where nothing happens. Example the shots of him standing staring at the glass. Also try and get better action shots. I know it's hard to do with vid game screens but you can strategically crop images to help with things. Also use photoshop to add effects, example speedlines or blur effects when the car is exiting the facility, or he's dodging bullets.

If you enjoy doing it keep going, everyone has to start somewhere.
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Old 05-15-2011, 09:27 PM   #7
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I think you're Bruinlove. Not the first time you've made a retarded gimmick like this, plus there's also this thread you made a while ago.

http://www.insidehoops.com/forum/sho...d.php?t=214661

So Bruinlove is that pathetic gimmick Nick Young?

Life is so clear to me now
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Old 05-15-2011, 09:29 PM   #8
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So Bruinlove is that pathetic gimmick Nick Young?

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Yeah, and probably OP too, and maybe some others as well.
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Old 05-15-2011, 09:36 PM   #9
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what in the glorious name of f*ck did i just witness??
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Old 05-15-2011, 09:40 PM   #10
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what in the glorious name of f*ck did i just witness??

The indomitable genius of Bruinlove
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Old 05-16-2011, 10:32 PM   #11
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First ditch the blue/black background. It provides poor contrast to the primary image.

Second the text is hard to read. Make it bigger or do what they do in comics with the opaque white bubbles. It's easier to read that way. Also the sound effects should be bigger and bolder text. If you're using Photoshop or a similar program also try applying some simple transformations to the text like bulge out, drop shadow or rotate it a bit.

Finally, there are lot of empty, wasted panels where nothing happens. Example the shots of him standing staring at the glass. Also try and get better action shots. I know it's hard to do with vid game screens but you can strategically crop images to help with things. Also use photoshop to add effects, example speedlines or blur effects when the car is exiting the facility, or he's dodging bullets.

If you enjoy doing it keep going, everyone has to start somewhere.
thx for there tips i make comics in 2007 but i maybe make more :)

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dude learn read use youre brain

the storyline is there are the teroraist to the world and muffinman have to stop there terrorist with many magics brainstorming and other.
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Old 05-16-2011, 10:34 PM   #12
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Awesome. So, let me get this straight.. when MuffinMan the hero, brainstorms, he blows up his enemy's? Fantastic comic.
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Old 05-16-2011, 10:36 PM   #13
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Awesome. So, let me get this straight.. when MuffinMan the hero, brainstorms, he blows up his enemy's? Fantastic comic.
yes he do a brainstorm thnx :)
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Old 05-16-2011, 10:46 PM   #14
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Old 05-16-2011, 11:07 PM   #15
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Remember Theo can't be in Iceland, he just posts at night in US which is 4 am like now in Iceland.
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