my comic MuffinMan please do rate

[Theoo]

hi guys here i have to you my comic i make a few year ago with my friend well there the first season with the freind i hope you have enjoying with it the storyline is there are the teroraist to the world and muffinman have to stop there terrorist with many magics brainstorming and other.

season 1

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[Theoo]

B]season 2[/b] i have make this season on my own not with there friend

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what you guys do thinking??? i think there many good comics i should make more?? the storyline is a complicated maybe and not enough action to there comic what to you guys think make postings :)

[Lebowsky]

I think you're Bruinlove. Not the first time you've made a retarded gimmick like this, plus there's also this thread you made a while ago.

http://www.insidehoops.com/forum/sho...d.php?t=214661

[Theoo]

Originally Posted by Lebowsky

I think you're Bruinlove. Not the first time you've made a retarded gimmick like this, plus there's also this thread you made a while ago.

http://www.insidehoops.com/forum/sho...d.php?t=214661

???? man idc what youre think i am what to you think of the comic??

[GatorKid117]

[shadow]

First ditch the blue/black background. It provides poor contrast to the primary image.

Second the text is hard to read. Make it bigger or do what they do in comics with the opaque white bubbles. It's easier to read that way. Also the sound effects should be bigger and bolder text. If you're using Photoshop or a similar program also try applying some simple transformations to the text like bulge out, drop shadow or rotate it a bit.

Finally, there are lot of empty, wasted panels where nothing happens. Example the shots of him standing staring at the glass. Also try and get better action shots. I know it's hard to do with vid game screens but you can strategically crop images to help with things. Also use photoshop to add effects, example speedlines or blur effects when the car is exiting the facility, or he's dodging bullets.

If you enjoy doing it keep going, everyone has to start somewhere.

[Mr. I'm So Rad]

Originally Posted by Lebowsky

I think you're Bruinlove. Not the first time you've made a retarded gimmick like this, plus there's also this thread you made a while ago.

http://www.insidehoops.com/forum/sho...d.php?t=214661

So Bruinlove is that pathetic gimmick Nick Young?

Life is so clear to me now

[Lebowsky]

Originally Posted by Mr. I'm So Rad

So Bruinlove is that pathetic gimmick Nick Young?

Life is so clear to me now

Yeah, and probably OP too, and maybe some others as well.

[B-Low]

what in the glorious name of f*ck did i just witness??

[Mr. I'm So Rad]

Originally Posted by B-Low

what in the glorious name of f*ck did i just witness??

The indomitable genius of Bruinlove

[Theoo]

Originally Posted by shadow

First ditch the blue/black background. It provides poor contrast to the primary image.

Second the text is hard to read. Make it bigger or do what they do in comics with the opaque white bubbles. It's easier to read that way. Also the sound effects should be bigger and bolder text. If you're using Photoshop or a similar program also try applying some simple transformations to the text like bulge out, drop shadow or rotate it a bit.

Finally, there are lot of empty, wasted panels where nothing happens. Example the shots of him standing staring at the glass. Also try and get better action shots. I know it's hard to do with vid game screens but you can strategically crop images to help with things. Also use photoshop to add effects, example speedlines or blur effects when the car is exiting the facility, or he's dodging bullets.

If you enjoy doing it keep going, everyone has to start somewhere.

thx for there tips i make comics in 2007 but i maybe make more :)

Originally Posted by B-Low

what in the glorious name of f*ck did i just witness??

dude learn read use youre brain

the storyline is there are the teroraist to the world and muffinman have to stop there terrorist with many magics brainstorming and other.

[DirkNowitzki41]

Awesome. So, let me get this straight.. when MuffinMan the hero, brainstorms, he blows up his enemy's? Fantastic comic.

[Theoo]

Originally Posted by DirkNowitzki41

Awesome. So, let me get this straight.. when MuffinMan the hero, brainstorms, he blows up his enemy's? Fantastic comic.

yes he do a brainstorm thnx :)

[JerrySteakhouse]

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[Maga_1]

Remember Theo can't be in Iceland, he just posts at night in US which is 4 am like now in Iceland.