hi guys here i have to you my comic i make a few year ago with my friend well there the first season with the freind i hope you have enjoying with it the storyline is there are the teroraist to the world and muffinman have to stop there terrorist with many magics brainstorming and other.
season 1
ep 1
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By theoo at 2007-09-14 ep 3
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B]season 2[/b] i have make this season on my own not with there friend
ep 4
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ep 5
By theoo at 2008-06-07
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what you guys do thinking??? i think there many good comics i should make more?? the storyline is a complicated maybe and not enough action to there comic what to you guys think make postings :)
First ditch the blue/black background. It provides poor contrast to the primary image.
Second the text is hard to read. Make it bigger or do what they do in comics with the opaque white bubbles. It's easier to read that way. Also the sound effects should be bigger and bolder text. If you're using Photoshop or a similar program also try applying some simple transformations to the text like bulge out, drop shadow or rotate it a bit.
Finally, there are lot of empty, wasted panels where nothing happens. Example the shots of him standing staring at the glass. Also try and get better action shots. I know it's hard to do with vid game screens but you can strategically crop images to help with things. Also use photoshop to add effects, example speedlines or blur effects when the car is exiting the facility, or he's dodging bullets.
If you enjoy doing it keep going, everyone has to start somewhere.
First ditch the blue/black background. It provides poor contrast to the primary image.
Second the text is hard to read. Make it bigger or do what they do in comics with the opaque white bubbles. It's easier to read that way. Also the sound effects should be bigger and bolder text. If you're using Photoshop or a similar program also try applying some simple transformations to the text like bulge out, drop shadow or rotate it a bit.
Finally, there are lot of empty, wasted panels where nothing happens. Example the shots of him standing staring at the glass. Also try and get better action shots. I know it's hard to do with vid game screens but you can strategically crop images to help with things. Also use photoshop to add effects, example speedlines or blur effects when the car is exiting the facility, or he's dodging bullets.
If you enjoy doing it keep going, everyone has to start somewhere.
thx for there tips i make comics in 2007 but i maybe make more :)
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what in the glorious name of f*ck did i just witness??
dude learn read use youre brain
the storyline is there are the teroraist to the world and muffinman have to stop there terrorist with many magics brainstorming and other.
my comic MuffinMan please do rate
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