Originally Posted by loot
Very good acting weak story.
1. Your organs won't be of any use when you died the way he did.
You don't get to choose which person gets your organdonations.
Bone marrow is retracted from the hip, not from your back nowadays.
Nobody can keep a jellyfish in a tank like that. Even zoo's and sea aquariums have great, great trouble keeping a jellyfish alive in aquaria. There's more stuff like that, just things I feel should've taken care of when you write such a story.
Nice, I was wondering if his heart and what not would have been good especially dying like that. And the part about keeping a jellyfish alive like that is verrrry interesting.