Jay-A: SOMETHING PERSONAL [Addressing a girl I just stopped talking to]

[PleezeBelieve]

http://usershare.net/kdf6ehc9ape9

I got sensitive side, too.


Lyrics:


Urgh...

On the real debated making this
Alot to thank but my patience chipped
Ain't a diss just somethin sealed with a kiss
Listen Miss...
Miss you a ton
No wish to back-up, just thoughts wrapped up
All facts dressed in black
Confess from my lungs, accept the outcome...just questioning how come
In 30 days ain't seen rain yet change from babies boos to I don't wanna f*ck with u
Damn....
More I brew, less this about me - more about you
For I am who I am
A man without grands, integrity is where I stand
You appease visually, that's easily proved
As a rule, truth is cruel
Beauty on the outside not a peephole inside
Philly's want a hero but can ya ego move aside??
My theory go...bad habits hard to die
Rather starve than march for pride
Feelings fill ya heart, weeks later we depart
Got me illin - like when the end begin to start???
Was just holding ya, thinking I was a boulder
Stroking ya cheekbones, feeling Casanova
Emotions rollin, but like lotioned skinned
It's over...
My boys like, we told ya
Joke's on me, she low grade like elementary
Feelings never simple, see
Didn't stand up like I stood up then
It's a saying: don't let friends character assassinate
Well mate, that phrase gone with the wind
Some ways hard to defend
Especially with no stake in....her heart
Start believing, irony meets reason
Like how you show strength to overshadow ya weakness
Insist in dating threesomes, resist what's sent freely
Want perfection like that ain't a deathwish
Question: what we ask in others, is that our reflection???
Patience, understanding,...
I know baby, tough shit
You on to the next one, ready to tell'em how you a tough get
High five ya girls, maybe bump tits
I'm a keep live and bump this
You can Dueces and the chump remix
Sianara, we can twist the facts tomorrora
Jay-A's mouth a problem, I gotta say holla...holla

[NastaMaverick]

I can see why she stopped talking to you.

[Disaprine]

damn it, my gif didn't work.

[brooks_thompson]

man, first of all, those lyrics are really bad. awful. and the production is arranged all wrong. it doesn't give space for the rap at all, and you don't give any space to the production.

[rezznor]

Originally Posted by NastaMaverick

I can see why she stopped talking to you.

[PleezeBelieve]

Originally Posted by brooks_thompson

man, first of all, those lyrics are really bad. awful. and the production is arranged all wrong. it doesn't give space for the rap at all, and you don't give any space to the production.

You think the lyrics are trash?? Interesting. Its pretty much a consensus that what I'm spitting is definitely dope, I just got to learn how to do it effectively.

[brooks_thompson]

Originally Posted by PleezeBelieve

You think the lyrics are trash?? Interesting. Its pretty much a consensus that what I'm spitting is definitely dope, I just got to learn how to do it effectively.

to be honest and objective (i'm trying to be helpful), your 'sensitive side' is definitely not your strong suit. i'd steer clear, or keep writing (without releasing the songs for people to hear) until it's matured a bit. some of the details are cringeworthy, and it kind of veered into taylor swift 'spurned lover' territory.

[Bean]

deucewallaces finally gets a shout out in a pb rap. props to you deuces.