"Story Of My Life ft. Jay-A" [I'm even sing a few bars in this one!]

[PleezeBelieve]

http://batshare.com/8nn87xck7rwn


Did I kill another rapper?? I'm second here.

[SourPatchKids]

First 4 seconds>>>

[PleezeBelieve]

Originally Posted by SourPatchKids

First 4 seconds>>>

Could this be a single??? I think the first guy did a good job

[PleezeBelieve]

Got this on repeat!!

I was f*cking around but I think this could be a hit

[ace23]

Yeah, you killed him.

I'm recording my verse for that track we're doing right now btw.

[Faptastrophe]

At first I thought the background voice at the start of the song was Gollum.


This could be actually called half decent if not for the second guy. Yea, I know it's you.

[PleezeBelieve]

Originally Posted by ace23

Yeah, you killed him.

I'm recording my verse for that track we're doing right now btw.

You know this guy? I got this beat from one of the tracks you upped on soundcloud

[PleezeBelieve]

Originally Posted by Faptastrophe

At first I thought the background voice at the start of the song was Gollum.


This could be actually called half decent if not for the second guy. Yea, I know it's you.

The second guy is me

[Go Getter]

trust and believe when i tell you that you aren't doing yourself any favors by calling yourself Jay-A.

I don't wanna shit on your effort and work but it sounds very underground--bush league-type stuff....if you're going to rap do it all the way live man pay for a little studio time and stop making these guerrilla ass songs that aren't mastered and timed right.

I don't hate it but you guys' sound needs work if you plan on rapping for real....if it's just a hobby then it's all good then man do you.

(I kinda dig rappers that disregard form for the sake of what they want to say so I like that aspect of your style)

[PleezeBelieve]

Originally Posted by Go Getter

trust and believe when i tell you that you aren't doing yourself any favors by calling yourself Jay-A.

I don't wanna shit on your effort and work but it sounds very underground--bush league-type stuff....if you're going to rap do it all the way live man pay for a little studio time and stop making these guerrilla ass songs that aren't mastered and timed right.

I don't hate it but you guys' sound needs work if you plan on rapping for real....if it's just a hobby then it's all good then man do you.

(I kinda dig rappers that disregard form for the sake of what they want to say so I like that aspect of your style)

The lack of timing you speak of is due to me not recording for a whole year. This is my 4th recording in a week. I'm not nearly as sharp as my talents lend me to be.

I'm back on the scene and the game is better for it.

As far as me calling myself Jay-A there will be a track in the future that addresses th other guy with a name so close to mine.

[ace23]

Originally Posted by PleezeBelieve

You know this guy? I got this beat from one of the tracks you upped on soundcloud

No you didn't. That was your last song.

Damn, this recording I'm doing right now sucks. I think it was something I ate or drank. My voice is all raspy.

[Go Getter]

Originally Posted by PleezeBelieve

The lack of timing you speak of is due to me not recording for a whole year. This is my 4th recording in a week. I'm not nearly as sharp as my talents lend me to be.

I'm back on the scene and the game is better for it.

As far as me calling myself Jay-A there will be a track in the future that addresses th other guy with a name so close to mine.

Like I said, a real studio and a real engineer could solve that.

You haven't accomplished anything in rap man stop acting like a legend and leave Jay-Z alone and concentrate on making a venerable record for chrissakes.

[PleezeBelieve]

Originally Posted by Go Getter

Like I said, a real studio and a real engineer could solve that.

You haven't accomplished anything in rap man stop acting like a legend and leave Jay-Z alone and concentrate on making a venerable record for chrissakes.

You want to master my stuff? Send me a beat.

I get the feeling I can make you famous. Seriously

[Go Getter]

Originally Posted by PleezeBelieve

You want to master my stuff? Send me a beat.

I get the feeling I can make you famous. Seriously

My guys own a studio in downtown SLC....if you're ever this way I can hook you up but I don't do music anymore. Too many guys with no work ethic wasting my time.

[branslowski]

That was nice, PB, lets do a track cuz, n know this, I promise u couldn't outclass me on a track though.